Citizens of countries just beginning

Citizens of countries just beginning to institute market economies lack business experience so profoundly as to take years for these countries to compete in a global marketplace that turns more capitalistic every day.

1. lack business experience so profoundly as to take years for these countries to compete in a global marketplace that turns
2. want business experience so profoundly that it will be years before they can compete in a global marketplace which turns
3. have such a lack of business experience that it will take years before these countries are competing in a global marketplace turning
4. are so lacking in business experience as to take years before these countries do compete in a global marketplacewhich is turning
5. are so lacking in business experience that it will take years for these countries to compete in a global marketplaceturning

My Ques: What is wrong with option 1?

Expert Asked on April 11, 2018 in Sentence Correction.
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Hi Riya,

Citizens of countries just beginning to institute market economies lack business experience so profoundly as to take years – Meaning citizens will take years. It is illogical meaning.

Expert Answered on April 11, 2018.
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