GMAT Verbal Review Q14

Default Asked on December 27, 2013 in Sentence Correction.
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14. The themes that Rita Dove explores in her poetry is,
universal. encompassing much of the human condition
while occasionally she deals with racial issues.

after SVA- lets look at the parallelism
(C) are universal , they encompass much of the
human condition and occasionally deals – “they deals” – SVA 

(D) are universal, encompassing much of the human
condition while occasionally dealing

(E) are universal , they encompass much of the
human condition, also occasionally are dealing – not parallel

“they encompass…” begins an independent clause. Hence, the use of comma to connect both the sentences is wrong. C and E can be eliminated. 

Dolly
Expert Answered on December 30, 2013.
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14. The themes that Rita Dove explores in her poetry is,
universal. encompassing much of the human condition
while occasionally she deals with racial issues.
(Al is universal, encompassing much of the human
condition while occasionally she deals
(8) is universal, encompassing much of the human
condition, also occasionally it deals
(C) are universal , they encompass much of the
human condition and occasionally deals
(D) are universal, encompassing much of the human
condition while occasionally dealing
(E) are universal , they encompass much of the
human condition, also occasionally are dealing

Option A,b Can be eliminated on basis of SV agreement.
Opton e look awkward .
Please help how to eliminate option c.

Default Answered on December 27, 2013.
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thanks dolly for helping me.

🙂
Advanced Answered on March 9, 2014.
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Happy to help 🙂

Expert Answered on March 12, 2014.
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Hi Admin,

Is C and D here … not a run-on sentence .. since 2 dependent sentence connected by a comma. There should be a semi colon .. right ?
     — Deepak Singh
Beginner Answered on March 13, 2015.
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You are right about Option C. It is a run on

The themes are universal…, they encompass…. 
However Option D is NOT a run on. 
The themes.. are universal, encompassing…. – Here the phrase that begins with encompassing is an verb+ing modifier modifying the entire clause 🙂
Hope that helps!
Expert Answered on March 13, 2015.
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Oh .. yes !

I wanted to talk about C n E actually.
They are run on … is it ?
Beginner Answered on March 15, 2015.
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Aah 🙂 Yes Yes Deepak.. Option E is a run-on sentence 🙂

Expert Answered on March 24, 2015.
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In answer option “D”-encompassing modifies Rita Dove or themes? Please clarify.

Default Answered on November 13, 2015.
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It applies to the subject of the previous clause – hence the theme 🙂 

Expert Answered on November 14, 2015.
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