SVA
Although appearing less appetizing than most of their round and red supermarket
cousins, heirloom tomatoes, grown from seeds saved during the previous year—
they are often green and striped, or have plenty of bumps and bruises—heirlooms
are more flavorful and thus in increasing demand.
a. Grown from seeds saved during the previous year, heirloom tomatoes
appear less appetizing than most of their round and red supermarket
cousins
b. Although heirloom tomatoes, grown from seeds saved during the
previous year, appear less appetizing than most of their round and red
supermarket cousins
Why cannot a. be the more pertinent solution in this case than a.?
Hi Debarpitchandra,
The placement of “heirloom tomatoes appear less appetizing” immediately after “grown from seeds saved during the previous year” makes it sound as if the tomatoes are less appetizing because they were grown from seeds saved during the previous year. A is incorrect because of incorrect meaning
Hope this helps!
