Types of parallelism

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As criminal activity on the Internet becomes more and more sophisticated, not only are thieves able to divert cash from company bank accounts, they can also pilfer valuable information such as business development strategies, new product specifi cations, and contract bidding plans, and sell the data to competitors.

(A) they can also pilfer valuable information such as business development strategies, new product specifications, and contract bidding plans, and sell

(B) they can also pilfer valuable information that includes business development strategies, new product specifications, and contract bidding plans, and selling

(C) also pilfering valuable information including business development strategies, new product specifications, and contract bidding plans, selling

(D) but also pilfer valuable information such as business development strategies, new product specifications, and contract bidding plans to sell

(E) but also pilfering valuable information such as business development strategies, new product specifications, and contract bidding plans and selling

No doubt the answer choice is A. Because pilfer and sell are parallel Why the answer choice does not follow Not only X but also Y parallel structure ? Can we use “Not only” without “but also” ?

Intermediate Asked on May 29, 2018 in Sentence Correction.
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He not only scored well on the GMAT, he also has a very good profile

Expert Answered on May 31, 2018.
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Hi Aditya,

“Not only…..but also” (very common) is the usual idiom. We’ve seen GMAT questions use “Not only……..but” (less common) and just “not only” (very rare) like in this question as well.

Expert Answered on May 30, 2018.
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Can you please explain the correct usage of this unusual scenario?

Intermediate Answered on May 30, 2018.
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