Why is option B wrong ?

The computer company has announced that it will purchase the color-printing division of a rival company for $950 million, which is part of a deal that will make it the largest manufacturer in the office color-printing market.

(A) million, which is part of a deal that will make

(B) million, a part of a deal that makes

(C) million, a part of a deal making

(D) million as a part of a deal to make

(E) million as part of a deal that will make

Why is B wrong ?

 

Advanced Asked on December 15, 2016 in Sentence Correction.
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“a part of the deal” must refer to the purchase not to $950 million

Expert Answered on December 16, 2016.
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